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Write a poem for me,
Darling.
What about? Oh, anything
It doesnít really matter.

Just donít make it
Dark or emotive.
Donít give it meaning.
Donít try to hard.
Donít give it feeling.

I just want to se you smile.
Youíve got a gift.
I just want to see you
Use it for good.

You need to be brighter.

What do you mean?
Youíve got to wait
For your muse?
Iím your muse!
Arenít I telling you
What to do?

Itís not flat.
Youíll enjoy it!
You need to smile more.
You need brightness
In your life more.

Subvert your morals,
For me.
Donít you love me?
Why wonít you do this
For me?

Write me a poem,
Darling.
What do you mean
I donít understand
Your muse?
Iím your muse!

Arenít I telling you
What to do?
A thousand apologies to Nora...

And this is one of my VERY VERY VERY FEW poems that uses punctuation. It's also one of the few satires, and the few that are meant to be read aloud with a certain kidn of inflection
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lesbian-harlequin Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2004
I feel like that sometimes..and I think about Emily Dickinson's poem..just can't recall the title...:shakefist:
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
YES! I love it! It's perfect!
*clickies the +fav button*
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004   Writer
LOL! I'm glad you like it. I was afraid you'd get pissed at me, lol.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
I couldnt get pissed. It said everything perfectly.
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004   Writer
Lol, I just wasn't sure if you'd get mad at me for writing about your life. Some people do.

But I couldn't not write it, and I couldn't not post it, lol.
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
For future reference, feel free to write about me all you want.
More power to you if something I say lights a demonic spark in your brain.
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Cerrilynne Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004   Writer
Fwee!
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Panther-Nora Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2004
Fwee!
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